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post Sep 8 2009, 11:07 PM
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He says, "I am use to dealing with the bears and wolves that inhabit the area, but this monster almost finished me!"

Should say, "I am used to dealing with the bears..."

He says, "I barely escaped, but now my injuries prevent me from exacting my revenge."

Should say, "I barely escaped, and now my injuries prevent me from exacting my revenge."

He says, "If you could locate this beast and bring me it's pelt I would pay you handsomely."

Should say, "If you could locate this beast and bring me its pelt, I would pay you handsomely."
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post Sep 9 2009, 09:11 AM
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